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Monday, 6 August 2018

Explanation Template Writing.

Walt - Using technical vocabulary in our writing.

Do you always drink water? If you don't I think you should. Drinking fresh water is important because everyone needs to stay hydrated and filled with water if we didn’t have water we would be dry and dehydrated and we could all dye. So in the next paragraphs below I will be explaining how bad it is to have no fresh water to drink.

Polluted water is not only dirty it is also deadly over 1.8m people die every year of diarrheal diseases like cholera. Families are living in places where they can’t provide fresh clean safe water. Water is like food if we don’t eat for a very long time we could die from starvation just like water. But where some people live they don’t get fresh water for reasons like pollutions too dry and the sun just dries all their water up.

People are dying because most people drink the unsafe water because that is all that they get to drink they drink polluted water and many people die from a disease that was in the water and also die for having no water at all most of these people live without food as well. Most of these people who live without fresh water or lives with no water and no food die and there are probably over a million people who are like this.

So make sure that you are drinking that water at home be grateful and thankful that you get fresh safe clean water unlike the people who has no water or who has polluted dirty water don’t drink the fizzy rubbish drink the water that you got at home it is good for you and it is better than some fizzy drinks be grateful of the water that you have it is better than having no water at all.

What are you guys doing drinking that sugary fizzy stuff that is bad for it may taste nice but drink the water instead. Over 1.8m people die from their polluted water. Stop littering stop polluting save these people stop polluting their ocean our ocean our sea creatures drink the safe water that you get from your tap buy the spring water from the supermarket water is much healthier and better than fizzy drinks. You should be happy unlike the other people around the world they don’t get fresh clean water like you do. Be Grateful and Thankful.