Term 2 writing sample

On friday morning youth town hired a bouncy castle for us to have a slide on. We had 2 turns each time it was exciting for us. Some boys jumped very high and they bounced on the bottom off the slide. It was fun but it was packed, the line was so long. But luckily they went quickly. But then the line was even longer by more classes coming behind our class. When I got on it it was wobbely. The bouncy castle was red and yellow. When I was in line it felt exciting for me. I was waiting in line with my friend. But we had to wait in line nicely or we would have to go back to class. Suddenly we were good and sensible because we didn’t want to miss out. We got a slide down the bouncy castle. We had fun.