Friday, 16 September 2016
Tuesday, 30 August 2016
Dear John Key
Pt England School
130 Pt England Road
Pt England
Auckland
NZ
Thursday August 25th 2016
Dear Prime Minister,
Kia ora I’m a year 5 student at Pt England School. My name is Paikea and I am going to tell you about the garbage problem in New Zealand. This is important because people can get sick because of the amount of rubbish in NZ. You must read the entire letter so you know more about what I want to tell you.
The problem I have is that there are plenty of rubbish down the drain because people keep dropping rubbish down the drains. You need to stop it. We can get sick by this rubbish it is bad for us and not really good. I don’t want to be sick by this rubbish. We want to be healthy in New Zealand instead.
John key you should give people fines if they drop rubbish on purpose and do not pick it up. You should have cameras around to catch people because then they will have to pay a fine. It is up to you but New Zealand will get sick really badly. You might even get sick.
You should do this because it is not good for us and we can get a really bad sickness. You also need to try and keep Nz clean and tidy. It can also kill a lot of our beautiful sea birds. By the birds thinking that there is fish under water but it is actually a piece of rubbish.
By Paikea
Kind Regards
Advice blog.
Walt: synthesise information from multiple sources
Task Description: This is my advice blog I have did a letter two my friend James yodde and I have gave him lots of advice. His younger brother is Chris Yoddle and I have also been giving him advice. If you need advice come straight to me.
Task Description: This is my advice blog I have did a letter two my friend James yodde and I have gave him lots of advice. His younger brother is Chris Yoddle and I have also been giving him advice. If you need advice come straight to me.
Thursday, 7 July 2016
Tuesday, 5 July 2016
My warrior

Hine’s tough heart pounded after hearing the stomping noise. She looked around fearlessly as she quietly took a step towards the bush. Suddenly a giant bird came out of nowhere from behind the tall trees. Gloria had been hunting for food but as soon as the moa came out, another ten appeared. What was she going to do? She killed them so she wouldn’t get attacked by them.
Suddenly she saw a dark person in the green bushes she wasn’t shore what it was. But it was a warrior that was like her. He was hunting for food but one really bad thing is that he is bad. She looked back down one more bite of my dinner she said evilly. Hine quietly picked up her taiaha she quickly stood up her pointy part of her taiaha was facing down towards the ground. The man came out argh said Hine she ran towards him she felt like that she was going to split apart but no the man did “Take that” Hine said and sat back down to eat her dinner.
When Hine finished her food she saw more and more and more men they were warrior’s. Boom Bam Ka-pow with one swoop of her powerful taiaha all the men fell to the ground groaning in pain. Hine became the strongest warrior in all of the land.
Hustling and bustling through them she jumped into space ready to fight. ‘Zoom zoom’ her taiaha went round and round and round. Up she jumped while the pointy part of her taiaha went straight into a bird. It squawked loudly before dying.
She only dragged one bird down the barky rough forest floor for dinner. She got her fire ready and cooked the bird she ripped it open wide grabbed a slimy piece her mouth opened wide and big and a big mmmmm in her head.
Thursday, 16 June 2016
The Warrior Princess
Rangi’s tough heart pounded after hearing the stomping noise. She looked around fearlessly as she quietly took a step towards the bush. Suddenly a giant bird came out of nowhere from behind the tall trees. Gloria had been hunting for food but as soon as the moa came out, another ten appeared. What was she going to do?
Hustling and bustling through them she jumped into a space ready to fight. ‘Zoom zoom’ her taiaha went round and round and round. Up she jumped while the pointy part of her taiaha went straight into a bird. It squawked loudly before dying. She only dragged one bird down the barky rough forest floor for dinner. She got her fire ready and cooked the bird. She ripped it open wide, grabbed a slimy piece and opened her mouth wide. A big "mmmmm'' entered Rangi's head.
Suddenly she saw a dark person in the green bushes. She wasn’t sure who it was. As he stepped out she could see that it was a warrior just like her. He was hunting for food as well, but he looked evil. Rangi quietly picked up her taiaha and silently approached him. Then she quickly stood up and aimed the pointy part of her taiaha toward him. The man came running out. "Argh!" yelled Rangi as she ran towards him. She felt like she was going die, but instead the man did as her taiaha pierced his heart. “Take that” Rangi said before she walked away.
She didn't get far when she saw more and more men who were warrior’s. Boom! Bam! Ka-pow! With one swoop of her powerful taiaha all the men fell to the ground groaning in pain. Rangi proved that she was the strongest warrior in all of the land.
Hustling and bustling through them she jumped into a space ready to fight. ‘Zoom zoom’ her taiaha went round and round and round. Up she jumped while the pointy part of her taiaha went straight into a bird. It squawked loudly before dying. She only dragged one bird down the barky rough forest floor for dinner. She got her fire ready and cooked the bird. She ripped it open wide, grabbed a slimy piece and opened her mouth wide. A big "mmmmm'' entered Rangi's head.
Suddenly she saw a dark person in the green bushes. She wasn’t sure who it was. As he stepped out she could see that it was a warrior just like her. He was hunting for food as well, but he looked evil. Rangi quietly picked up her taiaha and silently approached him. Then she quickly stood up and aimed the pointy part of her taiaha toward him. The man came running out. "Argh!" yelled Rangi as she ran towards him. She felt like she was going die, but instead the man did as her taiaha pierced his heart. “Take that” Rangi said before she walked away.
She didn't get far when she saw more and more men who were warrior’s. Boom! Bam! Ka-pow! With one swoop of her powerful taiaha all the men fell to the ground groaning in pain. Rangi proved that she was the strongest warrior in all of the land.
Thursday, 9 June 2016
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