Friday, 20 March 2015

My sister birthday

In the weekend on saturday i had a party for my sister 21th birthday.
My family went to Piha for her birthday. We went to a cafe down the road. I had a sasageroll for breakfast. On  saturday i went to the beach the waves was big. I flipped over to the shallow part it was strong.


  1. We had an awesome weekend in Piha celebrating sisters birthday and it was fun going to the beach.

  2. What a nice way to celebrate a 21st birthday. It sounds like you had fun. Could you post the reflection of your writing to see what you need to focus on for your next piece. Remember you needed to have one idea for each paragraph so you so going to the beach needed to be another paragraph. Maybe that could be one of the things you focus on.