Watching the fiafia groups it was exciting because it was nearly our turn. When it was the Niueans turn my heart was beeping very fast. When my group first took a step, I felt nervous. When the Niueans were finished, my friend and I were proud of our selves.
I love the sentence about your heart beating fast! - I know that you were very nervous, you danced so beautifully.
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yes miss.thank you miss king i hope you have a wnderful holiday
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