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Hi PaikeaGreat character descriptions. I like the amount of detail you include in your descriptions to 'show' and not 'tell' me what the characters might be like. Just remember to use the correct tense e.g. 'was strong' instead of 'is strong'. Well done.
sorry for the late reply
ok thanks though
Hi Paikea
ReplyDeleteGreat character descriptions. I like the amount of detail you include in your descriptions to 'show' and not 'tell' me what the characters might be like. Just remember to use the correct tense e.g. 'was strong' instead of 'is strong'. Well done.
sorry for the late reply
Deleteok thanks though
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