Walt: write a narrative
Walt: demonstrate understanding of a number of strategies and skills for writing
Two men name Andrew and Jackson are on a extreme adventure inside a cave. They both ran down the little hill that takes you underground there was a hole for them to go through it took them deeper and deeper. Andrew was so excited because it is his first time going on adventure but when Jackson was a little boy him and his dad use to go on fun adventures. They always would take a weapon to protect them from a bear or something. But Andrew also loves science and he is really good like Mr Bax.
The next day they got up really early and Andrew found a rock looking like a shoe it was a funny looking boot he kept it inside his camping bag. They kept moving it just got darker and darker. Jackson said “lucky I brought torches for us”. Andrew said “oh we should have a break or even go back it is a little too dark”. “Oh yeah we have been walking for long as aye” said Jackson. “ Yeah wait which way did we come from” said Andrew. “Umm I think this way i’m pretty shore this way” said Jackson. “I agree” said Andrew “let’s go then said” Jackson. Suddenly all was there was a wall Andrew and Jackson turned around until.
Andrew remembered that he has been making marks so they know there way back out. The ran the other way and to where they slept. Andrew and Jackson were puffing they did run fast but not as fast as Usain Bolt. “Look over there it is one of the marks you did” said Jackson. They both followed each mark but it was night because it say on Jackson’s i phone the weather app. They went to sleep woke up again and found there way out. “I’m not going in there again” said Andrew “me to” said Jackson and they walked home.
Task Description: This is my writing called into the deepest under ground cave. My class did this together. We all picked something to do with going inside a cave. We all did something different.
Friday, 28 October 2016
Thursday, 27 October 2016
Thursday, 13 October 2016
Olympics Day.
Today we had Olympics and it was all about fun. The first game we played was soccer. My team was called Ireland A my team was mixed up with yr 5,6,7 and 8’s. We lost our first game but we still carried on and tried best but we did win a couple of our games on soccer we also versed Ireland B. Our 2nd game we played volleyball the game that you have to hit the ball over the net and it is not supposed to hit the ground. I had fun and after playing all of our games we got told who won in 1st place was Fiji in 2nd place was Brazil and in 3rd place was South Africa then Ireland YEAH!!! After that we just went class and relaxed it was super fun.
Task Description: Today we did Olympics and the school was hot and had lot's of fun all day out side playing fun as games. I had fun and the favorite game I played was dodge ball. I enjoyed it hope you liked my writing.
Task Description: Today we did Olympics and the school was hot and had lot's of fun all day out side playing fun as games. I had fun and the favorite game I played was dodge ball. I enjoyed it hope you liked my writing.
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2016,
Ch ch ch ch changes,
Mr Goodwin,
Paikea,
Pt England,
Room 10,
Writing,
yr 5.
Tuesday, 11 October 2016
Diet Coke Bottle Experiments.
Task Description: We watched a lot of explosions and it was loud. We also saw other thing like one time when one of the bottles did blow up. Check out the presentation for more information.
Friday, 16 September 2016
Tuesday, 30 August 2016
Dear John Key
Pt England School
130 Pt England Road
Pt England
Auckland
NZ
Thursday August 25th 2016
Dear Prime Minister,
Kia ora I’m a year 5 student at Pt England School. My name is Paikea and I am going to tell you about the garbage problem in New Zealand. This is important because people can get sick because of the amount of rubbish in NZ. You must read the entire letter so you know more about what I want to tell you.
The problem I have is that there are plenty of rubbish down the drain because people keep dropping rubbish down the drains. You need to stop it. We can get sick by this rubbish it is bad for us and not really good. I don’t want to be sick by this rubbish. We want to be healthy in New Zealand instead.
John key you should give people fines if they drop rubbish on purpose and do not pick it up. You should have cameras around to catch people because then they will have to pay a fine. It is up to you but New Zealand will get sick really badly. You might even get sick.
You should do this because it is not good for us and we can get a really bad sickness. You also need to try and keep Nz clean and tidy. It can also kill a lot of our beautiful sea birds. By the birds thinking that there is fish under water but it is actually a piece of rubbish.
By Paikea
Kind Regards
Advice blog.
Walt: synthesise information from multiple sources
Task Description: This is my advice blog I have did a letter two my friend James yodde and I have gave him lots of advice. His younger brother is Chris Yoddle and I have also been giving him advice. If you need advice come straight to me.
Task Description: This is my advice blog I have did a letter two my friend James yodde and I have gave him lots of advice. His younger brother is Chris Yoddle and I have also been giving him advice. If you need advice come straight to me.
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